英语强人进来下. 谢谢 很着急!

onlytalent

这不是我写的, 但是我觉得这篇文章怪怪的,具体说不上来.请帮我修改下英语文章. 指出里面的错误.谢谢

Deeply absorbed in the beautiful sceen，two visitors are throwing rubbish to the lake。Ironically，they totally forget the stained objects behind them，which can be categorized as wasted papers ，remainning food and so on 。


The exaggerated and impressive picture does reflect a thought-provokng phenomenon。Nowadays，the environment is becoming worse and worse，a situation caused by people‘s lack of attention，which is surely quite harmful to our humanity。Examples to prove this view are abundant and the most persuasive is the case of global warming。The iceberg is now melting at an alarming rate，which is cause by people’s lack of tendering care and will inevitablly do much harm to our living situation 。


To my best understanding，it is high time for people in every walk of life took measures to reverse the grim situation。Firstly，publications should be made to make people aware that we have no choice but to protect our environment。Secondly，laws and regulations should be established to severely punish those who destroy our environment seriously。Only in this way can we move our society into a more harmonious one。

我自己的感觉错误如下, 但是我英语不好,只是个人感觉.

1.Deeply absorbed in the beautiful sceen

单词sceen拼写错误应该是SCREEN .Deeply absorbed in the beautiful sceen疑问??

3.which can be categorized as wasted papers ，remainning food and so on 。看起来很不顺眼.

4.Examples to prove this view are abundant and the most persuasive is the case of global warming。 这句感觉有点问题.

5.Firstly，publications should be made to make people aware that we have no choice but to protect our environment。???

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onlytalent

谢谢了. 帮我说下错误

小丞

Nowadays，the environment is becoming worse and worse，a situation caused by people‘s lack of attention，which is surely quite harmful to our humanity。这句句子里a situation。跟前面连不上啊，弄个伴随或者分成两句才行。

小丞

it is high time for people in every walk of life took measures to reverse the grim situation。这好像只有两种用法吧。it is high time sb. did或it is high time for sb. to do

小丞

还有几个地方读起来怪怪的，不过应该没什么语法的错误了....

我喜欢中年人

小丞 英语高手啊

小丞

回复 6# 我喜欢中年人

这很基础

onlytalent

回复 5# 小丞

谢谢

philchen

太中国式英文。Firstly，publications should be made to make people aware that we have no choice but to protect our environment。语法问题。 aware of ...... no choices...............publications should be made to make ..............换个讲法吧。有点罗嗦。Nowadays，the environment is becoming worse and worse （把and worse去掉）……our humanity 不适合，。如果你想说人类，可以说human being. Deeply absorbed in the beautiful sceen? 句子有问题，而且还Misspell

philchen

Examples to prove this view are abundant and the most persuasive is the case of global warming 语法问题

霹雳小裤衩

都看不懂

小丞

回复 9# philchen

Deeply absorbed in the beautiful sceen?为什么句子有问题？

onlytalent

回复 9# philchen

谢谢大力支持

onlytalent

回复 12# 小丞

这不是句子把. 呵呵

小丞

回复 14# onlytalent

额。我只是说这半句应该没问题

confused

回复 1# onlytalent

好长时间没接触英语了，也懒得看，只看了你提的几点

除了第一句sceen应该是scene，其他的句子都没有问题